Hmmm...

Ukyou's dying from some wasting disease...and leaves the restaurant to the
rest of the Nerima Demolition Crew.  Overall, a good fic...but I have a
problem with it.

Ukyou is 17 (or around there, anyway).  Also, she's a bit of a spitfire.
I seriously doubt she'd be resigned to her death so quickly and easily.  She
might ask for help or support, and might write out a will just in case, but
she wouldn't go so far as to just give up after being sick only three days.

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