Subject: Re: Careful Destiny
From: Thane Walkup
Date: 3/27/1996, 1:41 PM
To: fanfic@tendo-dojo.ranma.net

Just thought I'd throw in my $.02 on what I consider to be
one of the best new fanfics I've read so far this year...


I just read the latest revision, and if I thought Ranma
was a jerk in the old series, it sounds like his alternate
self was even more of a jerk in this timeline.  SHE'S PREGGERS?!?

I really like the way you're fleshing out the Ranma/Ranko
thing, but I'd really like to see them NOT get together
and please keep the lemon at about the level it is right
now.  Any more lemon (no matter how much some people may
be clamoring for it) and you'd destroy the story.  It would
be like you just threw in a sex scene 'cause you couldn't
think of anything else to write.  I mean, if it's important,
it's ok, but just straight gratuitious sex always has turned
me off in a fanfic.

Keep up the good work!

Fnord.
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