On Sat, 23 Mar 1996, Damon Jason Casale wrote:

I'm part way thrugh, but a few sentences did stand out.

	"I shut it right before supper, Pa.  Why?"

					^^
Pennsylvania? :)

	The hand scratched at a two day growth, half heartedly swatting at 

*SNIP*

	The hand limped away, grumbling about the rotten weather.  Mark 

Why does this conjur up images of Thing from the Addams Family? :)

No comments on the story itself yet, probably will have some by Tuesday, 
though.

								- MW

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