On Fri, 22 Mar 1996, PhoneyNT wrote:

I need a bit of a question answered?
would Nabiki, out of revenge for something Ranma did,
turn Akane away from Ranma? (so he can have shampoo
"take care" of him?)  Now my fics written and I'm
already wondering about whether part of it was a
little wrong.

I don't think so.  If Akane and Ranma really split up, then her dad would
probably push Ranma to marry either her or Kasumi.  Thus, she's throwing
herself back into the fire.  Unless she's secretly got something for
Ranma....

P.S. am I the only person who, after finishing a
fanfic, thinks that same fanfic is boring?  Is this
a sign that the story is not interesting, in fact, just
plain bad?  or do I just feel this way because I did
the writing?

IMHO, if you end up not liking what you wrote, I'd go through and rewrite
it until you are happy with it, since you are writing a fanfic essentially
for fun.  If I'm not having any fun writing my fanfic, I usually just stop
and go do something else.  One of my writing teachers once said that you
should just throw up whatever you wrote in the first 15 minutes, because
it was most likely junk from your brain trying to warm up.

Frank

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