Subject: Re: [FanFic] {spamfic}Re: Concering Careful Destiny part 3
From: Richard David Beaubien
Date: 3/20/1996, 3:08 PM
To: fanfic@tendo-dojo.RANMA.NET



On Tue, 19 Mar 1996, Todd Hill wrote:

At 05:25 PM 3/18/96 -0800, you wrote:

[painful commentary on AlterRanma's life snipped]
[more snippage..] 
You are a wicked, wicked man my friend...  ^_^

Well I did have a bad weekend, so this was venting. I'm not really that 
evil, unless you've seen part 5 of BCWYF, then you may start doubting
my sanity...BTW did I send this to the list,or just to the remailer?

Oh yeah, on the side story idea. Well again I don't think it could work 
from my vantage point, as I think any writer would be tempted to put this 
Ranma through hell, which would be fun for a few pages but later it would 
just get boring (or tiring..) Although I may want to do a side story, to 
a side story to my story....(Maybe..:)

And now for some real C&C (I'm too lazy to do another post right now...)
Mostly about the Kasumi and Nabiki situation. I got say I was wondering 
how they would fit in to this, but you manged to place them in and not 
make Kasumi naive!!! I wonder how Kasumi is going to react when Ranma 
goes to the dojo (not the usual guest greeting's, you did foreshadow to a 
slight catasorphe with 'What could go wrong' line.. Let's you have about 
two or three great subplots to the main plot, with only one slight 
problem, if Ranma does go home, how the hell will the other Univerese 
react? It might be very tricky to resolve some of these subplots if thats 
the ending your planning....if not, well ignore the last statement. 

Oh yeah, where is Kodachi? Out of the remaining Ranma 1/2 regulars she is 
the only one that could pop up into this story with out much trouble....
Hmm...Wanna bet the geek Ranma may have had a run with her? ^_^

Ja ne!!

Richard Beaubien
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Mizuno Ami-chan forever!!!