On Tue, 19 Mar 1996, Todd Hill wrote:
At 05:25 PM 3/18/96 -0800, you wrote:
[painful commentary on AlterRanma's life snipped]
[more snippage..]
You are a wicked, wicked man my friend... ^_^
Well I did have a bad weekend, so this was venting. I'm not really that
evil, unless you've seen part 5 of BCWYF, then you may start doubting
my sanity...BTW did I send this to the list,or just to the remailer?
Oh yeah, on the side story idea. Well again I don't think it could work
from my vantage point, as I think any writer would be tempted to put this
Ranma through hell, which would be fun for a few pages but later it would
just get boring (or tiring..) Although I may want to do a side story, to
a side story to my story....(Maybe..:)
And now for some real C&C (I'm too lazy to do another post right now...)
Mostly about the Kasumi and Nabiki situation. I got say I was wondering
how they would fit in to this, but you manged to place them in and not
make Kasumi naive!!! I wonder how Kasumi is going to react when Ranma
goes to the dojo (not the usual guest greeting's, you did foreshadow to a
slight catasorphe with 'What could go wrong' line.. Let's you have about
two or three great subplots to the main plot, with only one slight
problem, if Ranma does go home, how the hell will the other Univerese
react? It might be very tricky to resolve some of these subplots if thats
the ending your planning....if not, well ignore the last statement.
Oh yeah, where is Kodachi? Out of the remaining Ranma 1/2 regulars she is
the only one that could pop up into this story with out much trouble....
Hmm...Wanna bet the geek Ranma may have had a run with her? ^_^
Ja ne!!
Richard Beaubien
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Mizuno Ami-chan forever!!!