I was about to prod you, but you have a legitamate excuse.

Just a comment: the second chapter where they're on the way to the 
MA seems to be where the conversation and the ideas flow the most.

Everything before that seems disjointed and unrealistic, like
having the conversation on the phone and calling them by their descriptions.

Also, when are the next parts of POV coming out?

Foxtrot the Furryous
...I found something to prod you about anyway <BZZZZIT!>