At 09:12 PM 3/18/96 -0800, you wrote:

On Mon, 18 Mar 1996, Todd Hill wrote:

Don't worry, Careful Destiny is continuing, and it is open ended (hence no
known end to the story)

Yay!!!!

Double Yay!!!  ^_^

2)  Lemons.
        I'm going to try to further tone down the story in response to an
uproar over Ranko and Ranma's dalliances (but I will *NOT* remove any
existing scenes).  I do strongly suggest that if someone wants to see a
lemon that they find someone willing to write a side story to mine.  I would
readily consent to someone doing so (I just don't have the talent to write
good lemon, at least not yet...  ^_- )

Who said anything about lemons?  Keep the lemony bits in, please!!  You 
don't actually have any lemons, they're not necessary (I have a good enough 
imagine to have that sort of fun without someone having to spell it out 
in gruesome detail :).  What I loved is the, well, kinkiness, which works 
very well and rings my bell just fine, so to speak. ^_^  Of course, 
people are right, that you've got to hold back a little and not overdue 
it at first, but the trip to Dr. Tofu's and all that was very . . . 
intriguing!

So did I.  When I originally wrote that scene with them heading to Tofu's, I
envisioned a possible lemon scene with Ranma taking Ranko to some
comfortable and secluded place and giving her release before they made it
(no pun intended) to Dr. Tofu's place.  Then again, that's when I was dosing
myself on a neat mixture of Advil, aspirin, and penicillin...

Ha, call me a hentai,

Hentai!  ^_^

but show me a red-blooded male out there with testosterone in his
body in normal volumes who doesn't get a little thrill out of the
panty shots, bared breasts, long legs, short skirts, wind gusts
<drool, SMACK! Quit it, you idiot, you're embarassing us in front
of guests! :>.

Yes, the fighter cockpit scene from Project A-ko #1 comes to mind...

And hey, you only need the hint, the suggestion - Nabiki and Kasumi in 
the tub was too kinky?  I don't remember seeing anything blatantly so in
what you wrote, but you managed to get that delightful twist on it that 
was truly awe-inspiring.

You didn't get a glimpse of the first draft of that scene, did you?  @_@

Ok, to summarize, resist the editors!  Keep in the slightly kinky bits!  
Don't be embarassed, like everyone keeps saying, write for yourself and 
let the critics go jump off a cliff!

Well, the critics keep me honest, so I don't get too uppity with them.



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Later,                        |  <witty .sig applied for>  ^_^
Todd Hill                     |
Newberry College Computer Lab | Author: UY - The Prince and the Lecher
Newberry, South Carolina      |         Ranma 1/2 - Careful Destiny
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