Isabel Arantes wrote:
Part I: After the "Wedding Fiasco" (complete) Sections A, B, & C.
An interesting story, and one that was bound to be written. :)
Just a mistakes, I think.
- If Ranma's living at his own home now, how come he went to
the dojo and stayed there for dinner? Not to mention Nodoka
was there as well...I haven't read the last few manga... but I was under the
impression that Ranma, Genma, and Nadoka moved out, but
had to move back in. Anyone care to elaborate on this?
- How come the only reason the news about the 'wedding fiasco'
came out because Nabiki told everyone, when there were students
from Ranma's class that attended the 'wedding'?In my revised edition, I fixed this little problem (I think...)
I didn't realize this in the first version, the second version
was adapted to fit that people from Furiken HAD been there.
- Didn't Ryoga at first let Ranma have Akane, but then return
to the weding to tell him he couldn't let Ranma have Akane?Nod. But Ryouga is so damn confused all the time that I figured
he wouldn't be able to make up his mind... ^_^
- How on earth did Nabiki learn about what happend in China?Why not? Genma was there... and he has a big mouth. And Nabiki
has BIG ears... always looking for $$ resources and information
to sell... :)
Much less get photos? Ranma and Akane wouldn't have said anything,Revised edition... I made it clearer that the photos are of the
wedding...
since they're so embarrassed about went on there; Ryoga
wouldn't either, since he isn't the type to blabber about
that stuff (or Mousse). Certainly not Shampoo, since she still
wants Ranma, and would no way let anyone know what happend.
That only leaves Genma, who I'm not too sure was at the
scene, and even if he was, he may have not noticed it,
being under Shampoo's command and all.
Genma noticed.. in my way of thinking... that is why he forced
Ranma and Akane to get dressed and set up for the wedding when
they got back... I am just inserting the probable scene when Genma
returns, sobs with Soun about how romantic Ranma and Akane were (with
Nabiki within hearing range), and then bonk Ranma over the head
and put him in a suit... :)
Isabel ArantesHope that answers your questions... the revised editions make a lot
more sense (I hope)... I am still revising Part C... the grammer and
other stuff needs improvement :)!
-Misa