Subject: Re: [FanFic] [FanFic] A Lesson In Trust Part 1, Section A
From: Caroline Ann Seawright
Date: 3/19/1996, 7:17 AM
To: fanfic@tendo-dojo.ranma.net

Part I: After the "Wedding Fiasco" (complete) Sections A, B, & C.
	An interesting story, and one that was bound to be written. :)
Just a mistakes, I think.

- If Ranma's living at his own home now, how come he went to
the dojo and stayed there for dinner? Not to mention Nodoka
was there as well...

I think Nodoka gave up on that idea, seeing as everyone was at the
dojo for the wedding... Ranma wasn't put in the tux at his house, ne?
 
- How come the only reason the news about the 'wedding fiasco'
came out because Nabiki told everyone, when there were students
from Ranma's class that attended the 'wedding'?

That's a point...

- Didn't Ryoga at first let Ranma have Akane, but then return
to the weding to tell him he couldn't let Ranma have Akane?

No, Ryouga came back because he got lost on the way to find Akari. ^_^
He didn't come back to stop Ranma marrying Akane, as he gave up on
Akane, wishing her happiness. (Ryouga didn't even try to hit Ranma
once after he got to the dojo...)

- How on earth did Nabiki learn about what happend in China?
Much less get photos? Ranma and Akane wouldn't have said anything,
since they're so embarrassed about went on there; Ryoga
wouldn't either, since he isn't the type to blabber about
that stuff (or Mousse). Certainly not Shampoo, since she still
wants Ranma, and would no way let anyone know what happend. 
That only leaves Genma, who I'm not too sure was at the
scene, and even if he was, he may have not noticed it,
being under Shampoo's command and all.

Maybe that part will need to be changed, about Nabiki telling people...

Kun-chan...