Subject: Re: [FanFic] [FanFic] - Ranma 1/2 Careful Destiny Part 3 (alpha 3)
From: sysop@newberry.edu (Todd Hill)
Date: 3/19/1996, 5:35 AM
To: fanfic@tendo-dojo.ranma.net

At 11:34 PM 3/18/96 -0500, you wrote:
On Tue, 19 Mar 1996, The Major wrote:

Ranma & Ranko aren't having an affair at the moment.  Ranko is slowly 
working up the nerve and desire to try and start one.  Lemon activity 
earlier in the story would not have fitted the relationships as 
described... but things have now got to the point where Lemon (as opposed 
to risque) scenes could be fitted in.

Not yet!  It's a little too early.  Now, the way he ended this last 
release of part 3, there's a perfect scene for a little...  let's just 
say, 'fun'.  

For example; Ranma could wake her up, and upon realizing she's so worn 
out that even eating would be a chore, he could hand feed her.  And 
then, talk to her for awhile, and end up falling asleep on her bed.


You're taking those mind-reading pills again.  (either that, or I let some
of my editor's notes slip out in my last release *again* ...)

Now, insert your lemon scene here.


Insert may be a bad choice of words here  ^_^

Next morning, have Ranma wake up, realize it was a dream, then roll over, 
and bump into Ranko.  Imagine his expression.  Then Ranko wakes up, says 
good morning and gives him a hug, while thinking about the vivid dream 
she just had.  


Close to what I was envisioning.  I won't say anything, except that you're
the closest one so far.

Stir and let sit for 3 days.


Maybe not even that long.



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