On Sat, 16 Mar 1996, Derek Sherman wrote:

  David silently fumed as another blast of canon-fire from  

					     ^^^^^
Must be a purist, always obsessed with what is 'canon' ^_^

Besides that glaring error ^_- I loved the story. In fact, I like the 
whole APOV series. Detailed C&C this isn't, but I do know what I like...

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