Subject: Re: [FanFic] [FanFic] A Lesson In Trust Part 1, Section A
From: terrin@netcom.com (Isabel Arantes)
Date: 3/15/1996, 6:55 PM
To: fanfic@tendo-dojo.ranma.net

Part I: After the "Wedding Fiasco" (complete) Sections A, B, & C.
	An interesting story, and one that was bound to be written. :)
Just a mistakes, I think.

- If Ranma's living at his own home now, how come he went to
the dojo and stayed there for dinner? Not to mention Nodoka
was there as well...

- How come the only reason the news about the 'wedding fiasco'
came out because Nabiki told everyone, when there were students
from Ranma's class that attended the 'wedding'?

- Didn't Ryoga at first let Ranma have Akane, but then return
to the weding to tell him he couldn't let Ranma have Akane?

- How on earth did Nabiki learn about what happend in China?
Much less get photos? Ranma and Akane wouldn't have said anything,
since they're so embarrassed about went on there; Ryoga
wouldn't either, since he isn't the type to blabber about
that stuff (or Mousse). Certainly not Shampoo, since she still
wants Ranma, and would no way let anyone know what happend. 
That only leaves Genma, who I'm not too sure was at the
scene, and even if he was, he may have not noticed it,
being under Shampoo's command and all.


	Isabel Arantes