At 12:34 AM 3/14/96 -0500, you wrote:
This is the first part of a new original series I'm
working on. It's a beta, feel free to post/mail
commentary.
"Ano... sis... this place is scary," Penny said, clutching at
Brittany's arms. "Aren't you scared?"
Are you sure you wanted Penny to use "Ano"? I thought this was
supposed to be taking place in America?
ROTFLOL! MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA(THUD)*OOOF*
(Uh0h)
Sorry, my laugh track got stuck. Lessee, where was I...
I LIKE! I kept on waiting for some element from another series to
pop up, and it didn't! Very original, fun, funny, and weird, with
a touch (just a smidgin, not enough to turn it black) of Heathers.
Not to mention a slightly El-Hazardish feel to it...
Fnord.
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