I just finished reading this fic, and I have a couple of comment's on
this fic. While this a great exploration of the character Kuno, I really
thought I was reading an outline in some places. There are many places in
this story were you may want to expand on event's a bit, mainly in
Chapter 3 where I thought you may have rushed the Kodachi and Kuno scene
. But all in all this is great fic, a fic that could get a Kuno hater to
like Kuno, which is a great accomplishment...
Ja ne!!
Richard Beaubien
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Mizuno Ami-chan forever!!!