Subject: Re: [FanFic] When the dream ends....
From: Richard David Beaubien
Date: 3/12/1996, 3:13 PM
To: fanfic@tendo-dojo.RANMA.NET

I just finished reading this fic, and I have a couple of comment's on 
this fic. While this a great exploration of the character Kuno, I really 
thought I was reading an outline in some places. There are many places in 
this story were you may want to expand on event's a bit, mainly in 
Chapter 3 where I thought you may have rushed the Kodachi and Kuno scene 
. But all in all this is great fic, a fic that could get a Kuno hater to 
like Kuno, which is a great accomplishment...

Ja ne!!

Richard Beaubien
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Mizuno Ami-chan forever!!!