At 06:29 PM 3/10/96 PST, you wrote:

Very deep.... Thanks for sharing it :)

Why, thank you...
I am honored.....
But only females have replyed......
I find this odd.....

Well, I am a male, and I am responding to it (so sue me... Ive had 6 megs
worth of back email to catch up reading on... 5.5 megs of it spam.  Man, my
delete key looks pretty worn out, time to buy a new keyboard...)

I found the poem pretty interesting, however on the sing-songy side (so sue
me.  I like writing in an open form with no fixed rhyme scheme...  and I
admit, I do write poetry.  <Panda, put the tomatoes and stones down!> ^_^)
I really liked how well you were able to empathize with the audience and
share your feelings. I think, with a bit of work in rhythm and rhyme of the
poem, I think you should try to have it published.  (I have yet to have a
poem published, although I have had great reviews on my works...)

Keep at it, and don't let the lack of response dampen you spirits.  Be glad
that there is one person out there that likes you work... ^_^

Jon
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