Its almost done.  Perhaps within the next day or three I'll be posting the 
revised version on the mailing list.

Some minor scenes added to what is essentially the same as what was released 
before (and on the remailer and ftp.std.com archive).  Additional material to 
basically take us to the point of the fathers returning.  No, Kasumi and Dr. 
Tofu still do not get together in this one.  All I can say is that I think its 
going to take up a number of posts with my current five page mailing limit per 
article.

JK