I've got it mostly written...wellI think it's mostly written but can't be

sure....
	Would you mind sending it to me? I'd like to
take a look and offer some advice, but if you'd rather
wait until you're finsihed with it, that's fine with
me.

I've tried to keep the "extras" out of it

as much as possible....
	Extras are good, though. I often depend on the extras
to continue my story, if it weren't for them they'd be
quite dull. I've never seen Kuno seriously depressed,
I hope you kept that scene in there.

I think so to...I think it's something that doesn't really come into the

normal day-to day stuff...
	I thought Ranma had pretty much forgotten all about
it. When Ranma has said something really mean to Akane,
or vice-versa, throighout the storyline they'll be thinking
about it and feeling guilty, until they apologogze. They
never mentioned what Akane said that day ever again.

Actually finishing it is probably the easy part....I do most of my

writing in class in a pile of notebooks...typing it out...now thats the
truly nasty bit
	Opposite with me, I do all my writting on
the computer, since I can't understand my handwritting
a few weeks after I've written it, and htat can be a problem.


	Isabel Arantes