On Wed, 06 Mar 1996 10:25:20 -0700 (MST), 
Kevin Eav  <geist@holly.ColoState.EDU> wrote:

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   ...which he did.
   A bit short though.
   C'mon Kev, you let Hikaru off the hook _far_ too easily. This is 
_Ranma 1/2_! Where's the explosions? The weird martial arts? The mock 
drama? Hikaru should have barely escaped with his life! (Though he should 
still escape, of course, and defeat the others. I've no argument against 
the guy.)
   (Of course I took days to write my last section, so that may merely mean 
I write too much, but still...)
   More technical problem: If Tsubasa had glomped onto Gosunkugi, surely 
even Kuno, or at least Kodachi (who isn't quite as dumb as her brother) 
would have noticed that the ball had sprouted arms and legs and was 
therefore probably not really a basketball (making Hikaru's life secure). 
And how was he to escape the ball, unnoticed by Hikaru, while the game was 
in progress? My idea was that Tsubasa could not possibly escape, hence the 
problem.
   In short, I was a bit disappointed myself. 
   In the imaginations of different fanfic writers, as in different 
universes, though, all is possible.
   Foxtrot, do you want to give it a go? You said you wanted to write the 
section after mine. We can have the ML judge which is better and go with 
that...

Paul Corrigan
pcorrig@uoft02.utoledo.edu