You know were going to want to read more of this you know, because the 
first part was great. Gee, I wonder who Naru is..:) This is a really 
great start to a really long story. Just a couple of question's here, 
where did you get the idea for the elder senshi, and what role are they 
going to the plan? Also, how are you gonna explain the fact the evil 
general Youma are good(after the review Jadeite gave me, it's hard for me 
to look at him as good guy...)? Plus, how much how are you going to draw 
from the first season of Sailor moon..? Anway I'm looking forward to 
great that has Naru in it alot (because I like Naru...:) , as long as 
Ami also has a big role...

Ja ne!!

Richard Beaubien
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Mizuno Ami-chan forever!!!