At 03:49 PM 3/7/96 -0600, you wrote:

On Thu, 7 Mar 1996, Author Marisa Price wrote:

HI ALL. I just started writing this in class one day... is it worth
finishing? Does anyone have any suggestions? Comments? Praise? Criticism?
This is the first time I have ever tried to write a fan-fic.... soooo...
don't be TOO hard on me! ^_^
                -MISA

 I really liked this story (but then, I like romance stories in general 
^_^). I really REALLY liked the part at the end, where Akane 
has that mass-confusion what-did-I-just-do? moment (it's right after 
P-chan interrupts them). 

My problem is that I have no idea what she DID do that was so horrible!

but, great concept, great story, and also, shampoo is not mentally 
impaired..when she speaks chinese to mousse and cologne in the 
restaurant her language is normally, not broken like her japanese is.
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