Subject: Re: [FanFic] [C and C] Mystery Fanfic Commentary Theatre 3000 comments on "Natsumi, the Magical Girl, chapter one."
From: "Yeah It's Me" <yeahme@ea.oac.uci.edu>
Date: 3/5/1996, 12:28 AM
To: fanfic@tendo-dojo.ranma.net



On Mon, 4 Mar 1996, Ranma al'Thor <ranma@falcon.cc.ukans.edu> wrote:


Jadeite:  Great.  More mindless slaughter of my oppressed Youma kindred.  
By some annoying little cheerful girl.

Ami:  Sounds great!

I don't know why, but I really like that dialogue.
 

Tokyo, Japan: Nerima district.  Sometime in the past...

Jadeite:  Well, that's nice and vague...could be any time from yesterday 
to the Big bang.

This one too, why do the really annoying and obnoxious reviewers get the 
good lines?
   

Ami:  [thinking]  No flashback.  Please, no flashback.

Ami does make a pretty good foil for the revolving door reviewer.
 
Jadeite:  At the dojo, announcing it's engaged to Ranma, of course.

Bailesu:  Ahh....didn't think of that.

It could also be trying to kidnap Akane for some weird youma reason.

Bailesu:  I swear, next time we ought to just kill the guest commentator 
ourselves and spare the wear and tear on this place...

Ami:  Yep.

Then it wouldn't be as much fun to watch/read them be destroyed.

"Kasumi-chan... Remember, you can be anything you want if you put
your mind to it.  You can do anything you want..."

Bailesu:  Except now she's reluctant...so why did she change her mind 
over the years about being a magical girl?

Ami:  I suppose we'll find out.

How about maybe 13 years of almost reality and growing up? Of course that 
outfit might have something to do with it or the lame enemies.
 
Lovely reviews please keep them up.