Okay, attached are the first two chapters of my first ever fan fic.
Any advice on it would be greatly appriecated.  I do take a few liberites
with teh characters, but they are really small compared to what I do to the
universe itself.
        
        Thanks a lot.  And sorry about how ackward I've been about this.
It's like being a newbie all over again

Eric J. Brown
Oklahoma University Classics Student.
No, I don't study '57 Chevy's
http://rossby.metr.uoknor.edu/~ebrown/index.html

Okonomiyaki Addicts Anonymous - Ryouko's current love slave.

"Cause I'm wasted and I can't find my way home." Can't Find My Way Home
-Blind Faith