Subject: Re: [FanFic] Symphony of the Planets: Moon and Earth.
From: fong_jh@sunset.bph.jhu.edu (Julian Fong)
Date: 3/2/1996, 12:17 AM
To: fanfic@tendo-dojo.ranma.net

	I'm a little disappointed by this story; it doesn't seem to be on
par with the previous two stories in the series.  There isn't the same depth
of insight into Usagi or Mamoru's characters here as there has been for Ami
and Makoto.  I found the crossover cameos to be just too distracting.

	I take it you don't like Usagi very much, John?  I'm not that fond
of her myself, but I think the most important aspect of her character is her
ability to engage the audience's sympathy, and this story doesn't convey
that very well.

	The way by which Luna and Rei reacted to Usagi's mother's opinion of
Ami seemed to be a little extreme, considering that it's not a terribly
far-fetched concept.

-- "I will chide no breather in the world but myself, _____ against whom I know most faults." - As You Like It |_____|_____ Act 3, Scene 2 _____| | Julian Fong: fong_jh@sunset.bph.jhu.edu