To Damon:

There's still something wrong here.  In the section where David Houghton
writes about his entrance ( I think this is after Ozzy's entrance or 
around it) he mentions that I'm in the pen when I haven't even gotten out
of the trunk yet!  I didn't get a chance to copy down David's address
so David if you're listening, we've got to come up with a compromise.

Foxtrot the Furryous
...this should be subtitled: Entrances...

P.S.  I realize that Panda makes his speech after most of us get there, so
I'm gonna have to go back to the original section that I posted, but instead
of having Mr. B know that his weapon didn't work, just say that he pointed it in
my face.  I still disarm him, and I like the idea of my threatening 
his manhood, and I like the additions to the "fight" with Jenao, so those
stay.  Look for a re-write soon, Damon.

Foxtrot the Furryous
...could I just call you Casale?  It's confusing my fiance when 
I type to you and he's in the room...