Subject: Re: [FanFic] The Poker Game, part 2 (final draft)
From: Mr David A Houghton
Date: 3/1/1996, 6:30 PM
To: fanfic@tendo-dojo.ranma.net

The first is David Houghton's.  The second is Mike White's.  Of course,
simply deleting the sentences where "Foxtrot" appears would work, but
I'd rather give each of these two a chance to correct these sections on
their own.  I have the rest of the story, and I'll just cut and paste once
these segments are updated.  That, and I noticed a few more typos...  8-/

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        David sat, hawklike, watching the deal. He was very suspicious when 
they all grinned like Jackanapes. David's grin was not revealed by his 
encounter suit. He folded immediately. All the others were betting and 
raising, doubling. One called and revealed 5 royal flushes in the same 
suit.  Someone had been fixing the cards.  Foxtrot looked cross Wait that hadn't
happened. Actually it had but not yet. Lets see where is the Hitchhikers guide
to the galaxy.  Oh well Timetravel really screws up your senses. Just ask the
Blue Lightning crew if their in the same place and timezone as you. Everyone
looked cross. Hell even David's encounter suit managed it. This was obviously
the work of someone in the crown. It was just incidental mischief of the purple
beam. They decide to play properly if they get a break. 

        Cyborgs dropped in, only managing to scratch the encounter suit. It
glowed with blue fire and threw them away firing the organic.
        Wraith looked cross. Perhaps he ought to concentrate on one thing 
at a time. Back to the bouncer.

      David looked rather busy and ate his sandwhiches unfortunatley the sig
characters ate the nachos. A stupid thing to do especially since they'd just got
out from the comments and commentaries. This is not a good sign. Thaty type of
stuff tends to endanger his life. 

   He looked rather laid back while he waited for the Onslaught to begin again
Carefully calculated Panic was used and he locked his sigcharacters in the brig
while he waited to find out how to deal with them on a more permanent basis.

        Mr David A Houghton <ph41dh@surrey.ac.uk>