From: 	Travis Butler[SMTP:tbutler@tfs.net]

Given Belldandy's general innocence, I have a great deal of 

trouble accepting her in a lemon, though I probably wouldn't have the 
same problem with Urd. Keiichi falls somewhere in between; depends on how 
it's handled. (He's had his share of impure thoughts... though given his 
resistance when Urd tried to seduce him, I'd have to see some reason why 
he'd acquiesce in this case.)<<

Really! What if it's between Belldandy and Keiichi, that's quite possible to me, and acceptable too. Besides, who else is she likely to make out with anyway? She has her innocence, but she's mature already. In case you didn't know, there _are_ lemons involving Keiichi and Belldandy out there already. Good ones too, so I'm told.

people like the series they like, 

you write in a series you like, and people who don't like the series you 
like aren't likely to like your fanfics.<<

Try saying that fast five times!