Subject: Re: [FanFic] Story: Kreutzer
From: AlberCrombie
Date: 2/27/1996, 9:37 PM
To: fanfic@tendo-dojo.ranma.net

Mr. the Rutsch verbalized:


Kreutzer
By: Jeff Rutsch

wass the title mean?

All in all it was a nice story - I think I understand the temple stuff, I
like the fish the best, BTW.  What made you write something like this and
did you know about the temple work or look it up?


Hey!  I'd REALLY appreciate suggestions.  Keep in mind this is a rough
draft, I'd like to know about things in general.  Thanks.

Hmmm...read "Summer" again, and although I don't find anything
slightly romantic about getting drunk (perhaps having a number of
alcoholics in my non-immediate family influences my opinion...) I
really liked the part about "the ocean is the best teacher."

slightly alcoholic can be a good thing - it deffinately lowers one's
defences.  If you are trying to speak a second language - it usally works
better after a drink - why - you aren't worrying you will screw it up.  With
relationships - drink has a tendency to cause you to lose the inhabitions
you have about telling the other person how you really feel (or something
along those lines.)

Mind you, I'm talking after a comfortable drink, not drinking all night
long. 

My experiences and my $0.02


Jeff

of course you are!


AlberCrombie

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