First (on the Passion Spice note), thank you very much for telling WW
that Jody was with me (I'm a dead man!)

That wasn't me! I was the smart-ass who made the comment about the
ratio of "2 guys to 1 girl school". I stll think that's enough girls for 2 guys
to get a date<g>

     Are you sure? I thought it was "Panda" who told WW that Jody was over
here.... :)
     And you KNOW WHAT I MENT! (there's 14,000 students, about 9750 guys and
the rest girls) JEEZE!

    But, before I'm gutted, I must say that I've not gone over the prologue
with a fine-toothed comb (more like a large, broken garden rake), but from
what I've read, it's a definite improvement. Keep it up.

Thanks Ben. I've been getting some comments that there should have been
more background given (which to a certain degree I agree with). The new

section >for the prologue is just a setup for later events. I didn't think
it gave away >too much. I just realized that considering the next chapter's
events, I had to >tie Dr. Stingray with Dr. Raven early on. Chapter 9 "The
Enemy Within" will >reveal a little more about what happened but will
hopefully leave the reader >still wondering what's going on. I hope ;)
    I'll gut it this spring break.... :)

BTW: Chapter 10's title is "The Ghost of a Chance". Any Rush fans on the
ML? Check some of the other chapter titles<g>

     I noticed.
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