At 07:55 PM 26/2/96 -0500, Ben Kosse wrote:

I think this tells FAR to much...I like to be kept guessing...it 
frustrates the hell out of me ;)

Ack! Really? I was hoping that it would still be somewhat vague, while
alleviating some of the confusion I've been hearing about. The main thing
is that while this does explain some things, it is really only a setup for
events to follow that will keep you guessing until the end. I'll bet you

can't >guess who the anonymous investor is? ;)

    First (on the Passion Spice note), thank you very much for telling WW
that Jody was with me (I'm a dead man!)

That wasn't me! I was the smart-ass who made the comment about the
ratio of "2 guys to 1 girl school". I stll think that's enough girls for 2 guys
to get a date<g>

    But, before I'm gutted, I must say that I've not gone over the prologue
with a fine-toothed comb (more like a large, broken garden rake), but from
what I've read, it's a definite improvement. Keep it up.

Thanks Ben. I've been getting some comments that there should have been
more background given (which to a certain degree I agree with). The new section for the prologue is just a setup for later events. I didn't think it gave away too much. I just realized that considering the next chapter's events, I had to tie Dr. Stingray with Dr. Raven early on. Chapter 9 "The Enemy Within" will reveal a little more about what happened but will hopefully leave the reader still wondering what's going on. I hope ;)

BTW: Chapter 10's title is "The Ghost of a Chance". Any Rush fans on the
ML? Check some of the other chapter titles<g>

Andy

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