On Fri, 23 Feb 1996, Kevin Eav wrote:

Good stuff, if a bit dark (geez, I'm really glad I'm not in my 
hyper-depressed mood, what with all the dark fanfic going around.)  

Hyper-depression is a real pain, isn't it?  Nice to know you're feeling 
better now.

However--it's a bit fragmented, and the bit about the magic pregnancy 
potion needs to be explained more, as well as why Ranma runs away.  The 
ending seemed a bit rushed, as well, though logical(except, Kasumi 

I thought Kasumi was the only character who could convince everyone else to 
do that.  If Kodachi, for example, started it instead, how many people would 
listen?

starting the seppuku?). ALso, the wells aren't.  They're pools at 
Jusenkyo, not wells.  But all in all, I liked the story.

Thanks!

Soun:"When he's a boy, she just wants him.  When he's a woman, she wants 
      him dead."
Ranma:"...salad sandwich, and soup bread.  Wait. Soup bread doesn't exist."  
Akane:"Pile up enough dust and you've got a mountain, right?"
"KEEP YOUR FILTHY HANDS OFF SHAMPOO!!! *SLAM*" -Mousse, in full kick-ass mode
"Only the supremely wise and the ignorant do not alter." -Confucius
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