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Twister.
Chill out. The story is a *tragedy*, okay? That means it's *supposed* to
be sad! Really, it would be very boring if every work of fiction had a
happy ending.
Well, it wasn't sad... just very sick and very un-Ranma-like... I didn't
like that last Take Your Clothes Off (4?) for exactly the same reason.
You shouldn't use Ranma characters if they're not going to act anything
like they would in the manga. They can change over time, but not just
be thrown into something like that, which is very clearly nothing like
Ranma 1/2... It's just a sick story using Ranma's sex changing as an
excuse to put in the names of Ranma 1/2 characters... I'm glad I didn't
read the whole thing. I skipped to the end, and boy was it sickening!
Kun-chan...