Good stuff, if a bit dark (geez, I'm really glad I'm not in my 
hyper-depressed mood, what with all the dark fanfic going around.)  
However--it's a bit fragmented, and the bit about the magic pregnancy 
potion needs to be explained more, as well as why Ranma runs away.  The 
ending seemed a bit rushed, as well, though logical(except, Kasumi 
starting the seppuku?). ALso, the wells aren't.  They're pools at 
Jusenkyo, not wells.  But all in all, I liked the story.

 Soun:"When he's a boy, she just wants him.  When he's a woman, she wants 
       him dead."
Ranma:"...salad sandwich, and soup bread.  Wait. Soup bread doesn't exist."  
Akane:"Pile up enough dust and you've got a mountain, right?"
"KEEP YOUR FILTHY HANDS OFF SHAMPOO!!! *SLAM*" -Mousse, in full kick-ass mode
"Only the supremely wise and the ignorant do not alter." -Confucius
email at:geist@holly.colostate.edu -- Ishido on IRC at #ranma!