I hate to say it, but the commentary by Bailesu, Ami, and Taim was 
funnier than the original story.

It was one of the funniest commentaries I've ever read. *giggle*
Maybe he should just write a fanfic that's only comments on
different fanfics on the ML! ^_^

Wasn't "Lemonade" sort of a commentary on the state of fanfics?

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