I hate to say it, but the commentary by Bailesu, Ami, and Taim was 
funnier than the original story.

It was one of the funniest commentaries I've ever read. *giggle*
Maybe he should just write a fanfic that's only comments on
different fanfics on the ML! ^_^

Wasn't "Lemonade" sort of a commentary on the state of fanfics?

I guess it was... but it still wasn't quite as funny as this! ^_^

Kun-chan...