On Mon, 12 Feb 1996, Brian Geringer wrote:

Wow, this jumps around WAY TOO MUCH!! So confusing... like reading Akira...

Hm... I was worrying about that...
Should I put actual time on those events?
The afterlife scene is approx. several months after the end of TMTC
The scene with Ukyo and Ryoga happened _during_ TMTC (the beginning) but
   I felt that it needed a better look so I wrote that bit...
The scene with Ryuunosuke & Ukuyo takes place in early middle school.
   (approx. 14 years old..)
The scene with Ryoga & Ranma takes place during their elementary years.
   (Hm..... about 10-11 years old?)
The scene with Shampoo takes place a little earlier than that.
   (about 8-9 years old)
The scene with the wizard & the man blasted by light takes place
   several _hundred_ years ago.

I loved it, good stuff... makes you think... want more, later!

I'm working on it....

-rod m