Subject: Re: [FanFic] Passion Spice - Ranma 1/2
From: Caroline Seawright
Date: 2/11/1996, 3:18 PM
To: fanfic@andrew.cais.com

HUZZAHH!!!  I loved it - that was great!  

*^_^* Arigatou!

This was some of the best writing I've seen come across the net in a long
time (sorry, folx!) - I was impressed with strong use of Japanese and the
Japanese wedding - I'm assuming they are were all correct just by the use of
them - wow.  Another strong point was the pacing - I liked the little one

I tried to get info about the wedding, and I used what I could find... but
there isn't that much info on Japanese weddings that I found... :p

liners, like, Mousse still waited at the Nekohanten.  Also your choice of
discriptive terms the use of those terms was very nice.  One problem I see
in a lot of fanfics, is the lack of good discription.  It's always the same,
I didnt' see that here - it all felt fresh.

*smile* Thanks...

Good Job.
my favorit line (adlibbed) : Shampoo shook her empty head. It rattled.

*giggle* Everyone who's answered my mail about that fanfic has loved that
line!!

*STAMP* 'This fanfic is now supplied with the gopher seal of approval.'
[not that that means much.... oh, well!] ;)

*heh* Oh, it's a wonderful seal... does it do any tricks, like balancing
beach balls on it's nose? ^_~

Kun-chan...