On Sat, 10 Feb 1996, Harold Ancell wrote:

A warning: the "reality breaking down" element has the potential of
making this story even more confusing.  I think I see you in danger of
falling into a trap I myself have tangled with before: being overly
clever, to the point were others can't follow your creation without
being inside your head.

At the very least, after you finish the inital version, you (or
someone else) should go over it with an eye towards adding hints,
clues, a few simplifications, etc., so that others can get the full
enjoyment out of this story that it deserves.

					- Harold

	If I do things right, this won't be a problem.  Everybody knows 
where Ryo's reality diverged now; that's not an issue any more.  The 
changes in personality (and Ucchan's interior decor) all conform to one 
reality: the one that produced Spring.  I think I can make that seem 
internally consistent.
	Tachi is about to get a crash course in Spring Reality 101 
courtesy of Kodachi, Ryo talks to Nodoka, and Ranko must face the terrors 
of a distraught Soun.  These discussions should explain what's going on 
sufficiently.  It'll take a while, though.
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