[ Wing cheers ]

Yah!!! 

Okay, now the music. ^_^

1) The new editions to the kuno-ranma battle seemed... disjointed.  It's
   around where the text states that Ranma is in the tree.  Of course, I
   might be reading it a bit slow, so... ^_^

2) The gash on Ranko's face seemed a bit un-resolved.  Almost like it was
   forgotten in the process of liquefing the kendoist. ^_^ hehe...

Other than those two points, and perhaps Kuno's innane babbling(which 
means that it really sounds like him. ^_-), the story holds onto the 
feeling of action and dances about with the thread of impending romance. 
Like a painting that was always meant to be, but merely takes time to 
discover it's location.

Wing. [oops... should spend more time writing my own fanfic ne? ^_^ ]

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