you doing?"  Batman's eyes regarded him  coldly.  "Fi--oof." he said, as 
Jigen ran headlong into him.  The three fell from the roof, and plummeted 
towards the pavement.


sounds like LIII....

I like what I have seen of the fanfic so far, for the most part.  While I
think that Lupin would have escaped, I don't think he should have done it
as easily has he did.  We are talking about Batman, here.

And I don't think he would have started to say anything at this point.  It
really isn't his style to engage in converstaion with criminals, unless it
is to intimidate them.

I`m looking forward to see the rest of this.

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