Erik L. Schweitzer verbalized:
you doing?" Batman's eyes regarded him coldly. "Fi--oof." he said, as
Jigen ran headlong into him. The three fell from the roof, and plummeted
towards the pavement.
sounds like LIII....
I like what I have seen of the fanfic so far, for the most part. While I
think that Lupin would have escaped, I don't think he should have done it
as easily has he did. We are talking about Batman, here.
And I don't think he would have started to say anything at this point. It
really isn't his style to engage in converstaion with criminals, unless it
is to intimidate them.
I`m looking forward to see the rest of this.
But that's the point! Bats is a normal crime fighter (ala superhero) while
Lupin is NOT an ordinary crook. Batman expects the unexpected like from
Catwoman, Joker, Penquin, et al - not just escape! That's what's so
hilarious.
AlberCrombie
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