On Thu, 8 Feb 1996, AlberCrombie wrote:

This has a lot of promise.  Interesting concept.

Question: what happens when Dailey starts making passes at Al?  Or Leon when
Leona?  What about Al and Nene?  Enquiring minds want to know this stuff!

Heh,Heh...Oh, was that me?

You're off to a good start, however, I thought the 'tourture talk' session
needs to be redone.  It was too much like Act III (?) of Dominion - try for
a little more originality.  

Thanx for the compliment, I was going to rewrite the "interreogation" 
anyway. (I decided after I posted the expanded version, how'd you like 
that anyway?)

Can't wait for the next part.

Well I sort of gave you the next part, hope you liked it, and thanx for 
The C&C.

Myke
--A man of means, by no means, King of the road--