Yo Shadow!!

  I just read the story and in a few words,

  "I loved it!! Something which touched my heart and planted in my mind a
   picture of hope and rebirth.  Very Nice."

  In not so few words,

  "Shadow, it was great. And for several reasons.  First, it was smooth
   in way of reading and it flowed.  2) You depict the scenes and actions
   quite clearly and with a tight weave. 3) You made ranma a more...
   down to earth type person who doesn't just go around fighting 
   enemies. 4) I like how you are progressig the emotional aspects of
   the story line. ^_^ 5) I like the bro/sis interactions... Almost seems
   like they might fall in love with one another... ^_- 6) And finally,
   I liked it for it's sizable length. You might say there was a satisfying
   pieceof story to chew on. :)"

   Please write more and with the haste of the winds, and with the 
   inspiration of muses. 

  Wing. [You bring back the joy of reading Ranma 1/2 fanfics. ^_^]

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				"Nagisa"
			   nagisa@primenet.com
		     http://www.primenet.com/~nagisa/
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