This chapters are too short! :) BTW, Ryoga would
ever seriously hurt a girl, at least the way he fought
with Spring. He has a sense of honor too, you know.
Isabel Arantes
Ditto. And even if he would, I can't see him beating the daughter of
Ranma and Shampoo. Then again, it sounded like it might have been a lucky
shot.
Did you come up with the idea of multiple-temporally-displaced-Ranma-kids
in a case of parallel evolution with Decembers End, or did you borow the
idea from December's End?
Not that anything is wrong with borrowing it, I was just curious.
Anyway, keep these coming! I kind of like them short like this. I don't
always have time to read the longer fics, and I can read these short
chapters in a few minutes.
--
Erik Schweitzer Founder of the Society For Prevention of Cruelty to Fictional
Characters. (SPCFC)
Wow! I actually made worthwhile comments on this one!
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