Hi!

	This is a note for some of my comments on a few fanfics I have 
read recently on this list.

Old Souls Pt.3

	Wow!  Now the story is going somewhere.  I dig the contrast with 
the usual 'televised' world of SM with the fantasy Old World.  As the 
claws of darkness begin to strangle the world of light, this story could 
turn into an epic!  
	Hmm, Aurora as Serena's spiritual sister-in-law?
	Now that you've changed pace, I wonder if this will all lead 
back to events on contemporary Earth?
	A side note: Zoicite could've been female in her previous life 
and for some reason was changed into her/his familiar form by Queen 
Beryl as punishment for some reason.  Just a thought.

Lupin and Batman

	I like this, but I hope a story will unfold (right now, the 
initial scene is an opening teaser).  Will Batman continue to get 
frustrated and begin a vendetta against the trio of thieves? Or will he 
actually get the last laugh?  I wonder.
	As I was reading the chase scene, I was quickly reminded of 
Castle of Cagliostro and so I wasn't surprised to read your comment 
about it at the end.  I think that you could try to come up with a bunch 
of different gadgets that Lupin can use to foil the Dark Knight, since  
Lupin is like James Bond with his new gizmo of the day.  Part of the 
zaniness of Lupin is the unpredictable methods he uses to get his ass 
out of trouble.
	Other than that, it will be fun to see where this goes.

Nuku Nuku: Mr. Right

	This one is too short to really comment on, though I would like 
to see more of it.  Say, is that the same gang of guys from the 
restaurant in one of the OAVs?

	--Omega

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