Here's a corrected version of my story, with a bit more stuff added to
existing sections.  As usual, I appreciate any and all C&C from anyone on
the list.

If you find anything wrong with it, please be gentle!  ^_^


Thanks for reading my humble story.

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Later,                               |  "I remember when 'RIF' used to stand
Shadow Stalker                       |  for 'Reading is Fundamental...' "
(Protoculture Addict)                |	- anonymous victim of the AT&T GIS
(Moderator: The Robotech Echo)       |	'Reduction in Force' (IE 'layoff')
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