At 06:32 PM 1/31/96 -0500, you wrote:

Well, if you're a BGC addict, what did you think of part 1 of the BGC story
"True Love" I posted to the ML last week?  :)

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Jeanne Hedge

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I found "True Love" to be a very interesting story (I've been behind on
reading the stories due to time conflicts between school, work, and the
net... with school and work having priority over everything else... ^_^).
The way the story is developing, a story without heavy reliance upon the
power armor of the Knight Sabers, is an interesting twist.

It is interesting to see a writer that shows the point that there are other
things that can put your life on the line besides being a Knight Saber (and
in Priss' case, becoming an example for a ruthless recording mogul in a
career which she though was pretty safe, singing).  The flow of the story is
good, perhaps a bit slow overall, but a good flow that doesn't rush the
reader through all of the important points that lead up to Priss's tragic
shooting at Hot Legs (contract negociations, the mysterious fan, the talk
between the rep and the mogul about signing Priss).

I cannot wait till the second part of your story comes out!
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