*WOW*   *WHOA*  *CLAP*  *STANDING OVATION*

*a lurker is seen swepted off her feet by a fanfic....she slowly gets up...

CONGRATULATIONS!!!! Ron M :D: very good job :D

That was one of the *BEST* fanfics I have ever read....I know this reply 
is a tad late, but it's taken more time than I thought to read all the 
fanfics that come through the ML.  I haven't read the next parts, but it 
has great potential.  This situation, with so many male characters with 
female problems is just too entertaining....perhaps they will be more 
suited to a girl of a different anime ?....probably not...though still a 
thought. (but you know.....that house is probably going to get trashed 
four times as much as the Tendo residence :)  and the girls?.....jee 
wonder how they will react?.....(and not just any girls....girls with 
lots of power and aggression :)...(perhaps Akane can finally be second 
best to someone...*the lurker gets into a  defensive stance....fearing an 
attack from an Akane fan....) 

anyway :D
nice job!!!!!!

--trying to de-lurk
helen aka Sage-chan
troy@imsa.edu

* a lurker is seen trying to get free the bounds which keep it in the 
lurker's pit.......