I found the prose lush. OOog... what a way to start any comment on 
anything...
 Anyway, I found the writing filled with a heavy sense of sensuality and 
sensation which is good...(alright here it comes) unfortunately sometimes 
the prose is so dense that the reader (or at least me) has to push on 
much like an exploror in a rain-forest. I think this is good and 
bad...good because it paints a VIVID picture for the reader: bad because 
it is hard to maintain this style of writinng over a larger piece unless 
this is your usual style and I find that the inital startup is (from my 
reader's perception) a little difficult sometimes after more spase prose.
  
                        Or
            In a nutshell

                        Hey...neat.
                                           Mr.Insomniac
                                                    Neil


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