On Mon, 29 Jan 1996 SHHILL@vaxsar.vassar.edu wrote:

Uh....ok.

        This is my very first crtitique of someone else's writing.

I must say, I was very excited that the story was about Kuno, my favorite
character in the whole of Ranma 1/2. But Kuno won't talk that way. Has he a  
head injury? One serious enough to make him forget that he talks like he was
Shakespere-gotten. And he tried to commit suicide when he was younger? Come
on! The man who thinks he's god's gift to women must have thought so at a very
early age.

Shanika

 I wouldn't thinks so.. He talks that way now, but just because someone 
acts a current way doesnt meen thats all they have been and will ever be. 
After all, someone it took someone dying for him to get it into his fool 
head. I wouldnt call it a head injury, more like a heart injury. Ya gotta 
figure something made him the way he is, and something has the potential 
to undo that. Suicide is a possibility of anyone's thoughts, no matter 
how conceited. It's human nature. Hmm.. I'm getting philisophical in the 
veiws of Naturalism, too many Ibsen compositions will do that to ya.. 
Someone whack me with a chunk of cement before I get too out of it. 
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