Subject: Re: Comment: December's End 1-7
From: polaris@interpac.net (Jon K. Hayashi)
Date: 1/12/1996, 9:24 AM
To: fanfic@andrew.cais.com

In article  "'D'Artagnan' Frank Ho" <dkshadow@u.washington.edu> writes:

It was great, it was awesome.  I started reading it during lunch, and 
skipped two classes to finish it.

Hey, don't do that!  School is very important you know...

There were no obvious grammar/spelling mistakes, except for dropped articles.
I did notice a few wordo's here and there, on the order of about 1 per 
chapter.

I use a spell checker!  BTW, what's a "wordo" - is it like a grammatical 
weirdo?

>From the end of chapter 7, it looks as it the story has reached a cusp 
point of whether it'll go towards more of an action fanfic or towards a 
relational one.  Personally, I'd like to see it go towards relational.

Why does there have to be a difference?  Why can't it be both?

I'd blush at the praise, but I'm immodest and vain...

JK